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            <title>Kane - The dying</title>
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            <description>&lt;h2&gt;Ok i didn't like it, it was waaaaaaaay too cheesy, but here it is!&lt;br&gt;&lt;/h2&gt;&lt;h2&gt;Kane - The Dying&lt;/h2&gt;HOW YOU MET:&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
Kane moved to your town and became your next-door neighbor in 7th grade.
 You became fast friends, and fast friends became boyfriend and 
girlfriend once you reached high school.&amp;nbsp;Kane had the warmest embrace, 
the warmest kiss, and the warmest heart. One day, unfortunately, he had 
the warmest temperature as well. You couldn't understand it. He always 
seemed to be sick, cancelling plans from nausea and high fever. Whenever
 you saw him, he had strange bruises. You knew his parents were as 
friendly as&amp;nbsp;Kane was, but you became uncertain. He assured you his 
parents weren't abusing him, even though he couldn't explain how the 
bruises got there. After a while, his sickness began to affect his daily
 life. He was so fatigued he fell asleep in school, he lost weight, and 
his gums began bleeding. Finally his parents took him to the doctor - 
where he was diagnosed with leukemia.&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
THE STORY:&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
It has been 6 months since&amp;nbsp;Kane was first diagnosed and every last 
minute of it has been a nightmare. The doctors had put him on 
chemotherapy at first, which did nothing but further harm to Kane's 
body. You'd stuck with&amp;nbsp;Kane during all the miserable days when his body 
ached all over, when he couldn't stop throwing up, when he could barely 
keep himself awake. You have always been thankful that the chemotherapy 
spared&amp;nbsp;Kanes' gorgeous hair. You now sit on the couch beside him, both 
silent. He has just learned today that his cancer is terminal, and that 
he has one to two months to live. The only hope he has of surviving is a
 bone marrow transplant - and the doctor is refusing his insurance plan.
 Kane's eyes are downcast, and you wonder if he even feels you put your 
arm around his waist. You sit in silence for five painfully long 
minutes. Then&amp;nbsp;Kane speaks: ''My life and death are resting in the hands 
of the doctor, and right now he is deciding I should die because our 
insurance won't pay him his fat cash.'' Tears are streaming down your 
face. Ever since you heard about it, you've burned with anger against 
the doctor. Aren't doctors supposed to truly care about their patients? 
Aren't doctors supposed to help? Aren't doctors supposed to keep people 
alive and healthy as long as possible? A bone marrow transplant is the 
only way&amp;nbsp;Kane has a chance of beating the cancer and his insurance won't
 accept it. You hate the doctor and you hate Kane's insurance company 
even more.&amp;nbsp;Kane looks over at you and smiles weakly. His skin is pale 
and there are dark circles under his eyes. ''I look pretty bad, don't 
I?'' he says, ''I always forget how sick I look until you come over.'' 
''I dont care, you always look amazing to me,'' you say, only 
half-lying.&amp;nbsp;Kane gives you a look of disbelief, and you run your hand 
through his hair gently. ''I'm glad you still have hair,'' you say, 
leaning in to kiss him. You haven't done so in a while from him being so
 sick. He leans back, surprised. ''You still want to kiss me? Wouldn't 
you rather go smooch some guy who's a lot stronger, cuter, and 
healthier?'' You see insecurity in his eyes, and you know he doesn't 
know whether he's good enough for you anymore. To answer his question, 
you entwine your fingers through his hair and softly kiss him. His lips 
are cold, but somehow your insides feel the familiar warmth. You pull 
away and look into his eyes and are startled to see them with tears - 
all this time with cancer and&amp;nbsp;Kane hardly ever cried. ''I don't want to 
die,'' he says in a choked voice, ''I don't want to leave you.'' 
Immediately you start crying as well and you embrace his frail body. ''I
 love you, Kane, and I always will,'' you whisper. ''If...if I don't get
 the transplant by the end of the month...I-I don't know how much longer
 it'll be before I...''&amp;nbsp;Kane doesn't need to finish his sentence for you
 to know what he's talking about. You never want to think about what 
life would be like without Kane. You don't think you could survive. 
''It's a deep question, but...''&amp;nbsp;Kane starts to say, then pauses. ''But 
what?'' you ask. ''If I don't get the transplant by the end of the 
month, would you marry me?'' he asks, ''Just so my last days are the 
best of my life.'' As weak as his body is, his eyes are strong with 
passion for you. ''If I could, I would marry you now,'' you say, kissing
 him again. ''I really mean it,''&amp;nbsp;Kane says. ''And I really mean it too,
 Kane,'' you say, ''It would be the best days of my life too. I 
can't...I can't live without....'' You can't finish.&amp;nbsp;Kane warmly 
embraces you and gently brushes his hand down your hair, kissing your 
ear. ''Don't say that,'' he says, ''You have to find a life after 
I'm....if I end up leaving forever.'' ''I can't live without you, 
Kane,'' you sob, ''I just can't.''&amp;nbsp;Kane gazes sadly into your eyes. You 
wish he were healthy, like he used to be. You know you can't wait a 
lifetime if he dies. Suddenly&amp;nbsp;Kane places his hands on your cheeks and 
kisses you with so much passion you forget how to breathe. All time 
stops and there's nothing left of the world but you and Kane. After the 
kiss ends,&amp;nbsp;Kane collapses. You lay his head on your lap and bawl your 
eyes out, praying harder than you've ever prayed before for Kane's 
life.&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
LATER:&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
The end of the month approaches and there has been no progress with the 
insurance company.&amp;nbsp;Kane looks more ill than ever, but he always looks 
gorgeous in your eyes. As Kane's final wish, you two get married. You 
have to be much gentler with him, but he somehow finds the strength to 
please you. The end of his life approaches, your tears fall faster, your
 hope sinks...until the phone rings.&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
IN THE FUTURE:&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
Miraculously Kane's insurance company accepts the bone marrow 
transplant.&amp;nbsp;Kane is rushed to the hospital where he receives the 
transplant successfully. For what seems like forever, the new bone 
marrow seems to be doing nothing at all, but slowly you realize&amp;nbsp;Kane is 
getting better. Occasionally his body goes through some scary phases 
where it reacts around the new bone marrow, but otherwise&amp;nbsp;Kane slowly 
starts getting healthier. His smile is brighter. His kiss is stronger. 
After a full year and a half, he has finally gone into remission and he 
is back to full strength. With all the money that's been donated to him 
through fundraisers and benefits, he takes you on a Jamaican cruise with
 him. One night you're sitting on deck gazing at the stars. He looks at 
you and whispers, ''You know, you've always been there for me, for 
better, for worse, for richer, for poorer. In sickness and in health. 
You were doing that before we even got married.'' ''I fell madly in love
 with you, and I still am, how can I not be there for you always?'' you 
ask with a smile. ''I know you didn't get to enjoy some of the things 
you would have gotten if you...well, dated other stronger healthier 
guys,''&amp;nbsp;Kane continues, ''Like going on dates, doing fun things like 
amusement parks. I was just a little shrimp and all you could do was sit
 around and take care of me.'' ''I loved taking care of you, Kane,'' you
 say stubbornly. ''Well, sure, but now that I'm healthy again,'' he says
 with a mischievous grin, ''Why don't we do some of the things every 
married couple ought to do?'' Later he takes you dancing, and then when 
you get ready for bed, he surprises you with a very passionate session 
of love-making. After you get home from the cruise, you discover you're 
pregnant. Later on, you and&amp;nbsp;Kane have 7 kids. Kane's leukemia never 
comes back and you both live to be over 100 years old.</description>
            <pubDate>Thu, 14 Apr 2011 01:16:01 +0100</pubDate>
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            <title>Khris - The Very Very Popular one</title>
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            <description>HOW YOU MET:&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
You've known Khris pretty much your whole life - and you've never been 
impressed with him. Even from the very moment he was born, he was the 
most popular baby in the hospital. His parents were rich, he had a 
gajillion rich relatives (you've always secretly wondered if he were 
related to Donald Trump or Bill Gates), and he was spoiled beyond all 
hope. Now in high school, nothing has changed, except perhaps that his 
parents are even richer now. He gets whatever he wants whenever he wants
 and it makes you mad because your family is lower-middle class and can 
hardly afford anything other than necessities. You are the loner at 
school while everyone flocks around Khris like he's a celebrity. You 
don't like him. At all. But the thing that annoys you the most is how he
 looks at you all the time - like you're some little speck of dirt that 
doesn't belong in his perfect life.&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
THE STORY:&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
You are walking the halls at school, staying invisible like usual. 
Sometimes you wish so badly you had friends, but other times you don't 
care. You don't have to worry about backstabbing, gossip, what they'll 
think of you, etc. Now is one of those times you wish someone was there 
to talk with you. Up ahead, you notice Khris and his 150-member posse 
coming down the opposite direction. The halls aren't that big, so as you
 pass, you accidentally bang into Khris's arm. He stops and looks at 
you, his narrow eyes boring into you. He opens his mouth and you can 
just hear what he's going to say even before he says it: ''Watch where 
you're going, idiot.'' You immediately turn away from him and continue 
your walk up the hall before you can hear him. Sure, you want friends, 
but you don't ever want to be as popular and spoiled as Khris.&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
LATER:&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
After school, you start to walk home. It's absolutely freezing outside, 
with flurries already adding to the 3 inches of snow on the ground. 
You'd rather walk home than get packed into a bus with kids who'll only 
either ignore you or make fun of you. You start down the sidewalk when a
 car pulls up next to you. It's a sleek black beautiful Mustang. The 
windows are tinted, but you don't even need to see through them to know 
it's Khris's car. The window rolls down and you wonder what crude remark
 he's going to yell at you before he drives off. You keep walking. Then 
you hear his voice: ''Need a ride?'' You stop for a second or two and 
look at him confusedly, but then say, ''No, I'm good'' and continue 
walking. He follows closely with his car and yells, ''It's four degrees 
out there. You'll freeze. Hop in the car.'' You do feel very numb 
already and his offer sounds pretty good. Against your better judgement,
 you get into the passenger side of his car. The heat in his car feels 
good. ''Where do you live?'' he asks. You tell him your street name. 
''That's a heck of a long way to walk in this weather,'' he says, 
looking at you ''like that'' again. ''I'm sorry for inconveniencing 
you,'' you mutter, refusing to look at him, even though you can feel his
 stare on you. ''I never said you were inconveniencing me,'' Khris says,
 ''This is just crappy weather to walk home in.'' You wonder why he's 
even bothering talking with you when it hits you. Of course. Every girl 
in the school dreams of being Khris's date - and probably has been at 
one time or another. You are the only one he hasn't ''scored'' yet. And 
you plan to keep it that way. You're not going to be another one of his 
statistics. You don't talk to him until he pulls into your driveway, 
when you mutter a ''thanks'' and trot up to your front door. You try to 
open it - but it's locked. Where's your mom? She works out of the home, 
so she's there all day. You ring the doorbell. No one answers. You know 
you don't have a key on you and the spare is getting fixed. You wish you
 could just die. Nobody else gets locked out of their house like this. 
''Locked out?'' a voice calls. You turn around and notice Khris is still
 there. You nod at him. ''Well, come back in the car then, it's warmer 
in here than it is out there,'' he says, getting back into his car. You 
sigh and get back into his car as well. ''Oh yeah, now I remember Mom 
saying she had to go grocery shopping,'' you say under your breath, ''I 
guess she's not back yet.'' ''Are you hungry? Do you want to get 
something to eat?'' Khris asks. You look at him suspiciously. ''Don't 
you have a girlfriend?'' you ask. ''No,'' he responds, ''But you didn't 
answer my question.'' You stare at him for a moment. You've always 
agreed he's very cute, but you've thought his personality too ugly to 
even consider him. You wonder if he has a hidden agenda or if this is 
how he really is. You don't want to be taken advantage of. ''What is it 
about me that you don't like?'' he suddenly interrupts your thoughts. 
You look at him confusedly. ''Whenever I try to talk to you, you ignore 
me,'' he goes on, ''Whenever I try to be nice, you refuse the gesture. 
You're always glaring at me like I'm the biggest jerk you've ever met in
 your life. I don't understand what I've done to deserve this.'' You're 
startled. You always thought HE was the one staring at you like you were
 the jerk. Still, you don't understand why he would get upset over this.
 ''What do you care what I think? I'm just one person and I'm not even 
among your gajillion friends,'' you say. ''I've been trying to befriend 
you,'' he says, ''I've always thought you were a really interesting 
girl. A bit misunderstood at times, I guess, and lonely, but I wanted to
 get to know you. Most of the kids who hang around me just do it to 
'raise their status,' like it's important. Yes, I'm popular and I'm 
rich, which makes me luckier than most other kids, but I'm still a 
person, you know.'' He's now staring deeply into your eyes, seemingly 
entranced. You keep yourself guarded. ''How many other girls have you 
used those lines on?'' you ask. Khris looks like you just slapped him in
 the face. ''I've heard the stories about what you do to girls, as 
they're only 'objects to be triumphed' for you,'' you say. ''And I've 
heard the stories about Snow White and the seven dwarves, but they're 
just stories!'' Khris exclaims, looking more hurt than you thought he'd 
be. ''What you don't realize is, being popular isn't really 'the life' 
all the time. People start rumors about you that are so opposite from 
the truth. I've heard girls talk about how much they had a 'perfect 
date' with me when I never went out with them at all. In fact, I've only
 had a few girlfriends in my life. When I turn some girls down, they get
 really mad and start stupid rumors about me, like how I 'raped' them. I
 just assume that no one's going to believe them because it's obviously 
not true. I'm a virgin. But apparently a bunch of people believe that I 
take advantage of girls just because I'm popular!'' Suddenly you feel 
absolutely horrible about everything you said to him - and even 
everything you've ever believed about him. Inside you knew you never 
gave him a chance because you thought he'd never give you a chance. He's
 popular. You're not. He's rich. You're not. You always thought he was 
conceited. Now you see how much he's really just a person like you. 
''I'm sorry,'' you say, ''I just never thought you'd...you'd ever 
like...I mean...'' He sighs and looks at you sadly. ''That's another 
disadvantage to being popular,'' he says, ''The only girl you really 
like is the one you can't have because she doesn't think she's 'good 
enough.''' You freeze and stare at him, unaware your mouth is hanging 
open. ''I-I'm the only girl in school you really like?'' you stammer. 
''I've liked you since 6th grade! I always tried to show you, but most 
of the time all I could ever get to do was just look at you,'' Khris 
says. ''Really? I always thought you were looking at me like you hated 
my guts,'' you say. ''You always turned away before I could smile at 
you,'' Khris says. You stare at him and he stares at you. You look at 
his lips, suddenly longing for them. Slowly he leans forward. He stops 
inches from your face. ''Can I...? I mean, I've been wanting to since 
6th grade,'' he says with a nervous laugh. ''Well, I'm pretty much 
invisible at school, so if you want to kiss air, then go ahead,'' you 
smile. He leans the rest of the way in and presses his lips deeply into 
yours. It's your first kiss and it takes your breath away. After he 
pulls away, he looks breathless as well. ''Well, that certainly didn't 
feel like kissing air,'' he says. You laugh and start to lean in to kiss
 him again when your mom pulls into the driveway. ''Drat,'' you and 
Khris say at the same time. As your mom steps out of her car, you 
squeeze Khris's hand, smile, and say ''see you tomorrow'' as you get out
 of his car. Your mom asks, ''Who's he?'' You reply, ''Oh, just the guy I
 think I fell in love with a few minutes ago.''&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
IN THE FUTURE:&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
You and Khris go public, which makes you part of the popular crowd. 
However, you don't enjoy it as much as you thought you would - 
particularly because a lot of other girls are starting to get mad at 
you. You become the target of their rumors and hate messages. It gets to
 be too much at times, but just when you think you can't take it 
anymore, Khris makes you feel entirely better. Somehow you manage to 
survive to the end of high school, where you and Khris go to the same 
college. Khris is as popular in college as he always has been, and there
 is an unfortunate incident where a girl approached him determinedly and
 began kissing him, even though he tried to pull away. You caught them 
and couldn't believe it. Khris begs you to believe him, that he tried to
 get away from her, but you decide to break up with him. After a while, 
though, you realize you never had any reason to doubt Khris's word and 
you come back to him. There is still tension between you two, as you 
both are still hurt, but eventually you work it out and a couple years 
later you get married and have 3 rich popular kids.</description>
            <pubDate>Thu, 14 Apr 2011 01:03:03 +0100</pubDate>
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            <title>Harlan- The Guilty</title>
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            <description> Harlan says, his face filled with hurt as well. ''If you think I'm 'too
 much of a blessing' for you, then why did you even ask me out in the 
first place? It would've been better if you'd just left me alone,'' you 
say and start to close the door, but he puts his hand out and stops it. 
''Please,'' he says, ''Don't be angry at me like this. I....I'll explain
 everything. I really, truly lo--...like you, and I don't want to break 
up, but you don't realize...you think I'm the greatest nicest guy in the
 world and you don't see that your boyfriend's a criminal.'' Confused 
but taking his word that he'll tell you his story, you let him inside. 
He pauses, looks at you nervously, then says, ''It's...it's just so hard
 to...I wish I didn't have to tell you this.'' ''Well, you're telling me
 because I'm tired of guys not telling me anything before they leave 
me,'' you say, then decide to be less harsh with him because he really 
seems to be struggling and you say, ''I mean...you know you can tell me 
anything. I'll listen, I won't tell anyone else. Just get it off your 
chest. I haven't done anything to make you not trust me.'' ''I know, I 
trust you,'' Harlan says, ''It's me I don't trust. It's...it happened 
the beginning of this school year, at my old school. I've always been a 
good kid, you know. I have a good relationship with my parents, I get 
good grades, I don't go out partying or drinking or anything. Never 
tried any of that stuff. Ever since 7th grade everyone, even my friends 
kept making fun of me because I wouldn't 'lighten up' and 'have fun.' I 
always shrugged it off. A relationship with my parents and making a 
future for myself was more important than getting drunk or high. But 
finally...for the first time, I decided I wasn't going to be the prude 
in school anymore, so I went to a party and...well, I didn't even really
 like the beer, but hey, I finally got accepted. I downed a couple 
pretty fast and felt a little buzzed, and I decided to leave early. My 
parents thought I was just at a friends house hanging out, so if I hung 
around and drunk even more, it'd be really noticeable. So I just decided
 to go. I was driving down an old country road, feeling funny but still 
okay, I guess...or, well...I wasn't so okay. I thought I saw something 
drop on the floor over by the passenger side. Normally if I were 
thinking straight, I'd never just reach down and pick it up, I'd pull 
over, but I just reached down this time. I didn't see it at first so I 
kept searching. Then I heard the sound of brakes being slammed on and I 
looked up just in time to see me approaching another car head-on.'' 
Harlan pauses, tears welling up in his eyes. He looks at the ground and 
swallows, then in a choked voice continues, ''To make a long story 
short, I hit the car. I got banged up a little. Broke my arm, got some 
nasty cuts on my forehead and neck, which is kinda the reason I grew my 
hair long. But the woman in the other car...she was a young woman, 26 
years old. Had a husband and 3 young kids. Made a living as a nurse. I 
killed her.'' Harlan looks into your eyes, the tears spilling down his 
cheeks. ''She died on impact,'' he whispers, ''All because of one time 
when I decided to do something I knew wasn't that smart. My BAC wasn't 
even all that high, it was only .10, but it was enough to knock my 
common sense down a few notches. I was taken to court, and....well, the 
woman's husband, apparently he was really devoted to God or something. 
He was actually really nice to me. Told me it was an accident. I'd made a
 mistake, but I could see how wrong I was and how bad I felt about it. 
And I felt horrible, as horrible as you can feel. I felt like a 
murderer. I would do anything just to take back that night...'' Harlan 
pauses again, then finishes his story by saying, ''So the man asked the 
judge and jury to give me a light sentence. The judge revoked my license
 and gave me 100 hours of community service, plus I had to pay a hefty 
fine. So...I just worked all the community service off right before I 
moved here. I had to move. Everyone called me a murderer at my old 
school. I had a girlfriend back then...she slapped me in the face, told 
me she was ashamed she ever fell for a murderer, and then never even 
looked at me again. So now I'm here...'' He looks into your face with 
uncertainty. Your face is written with shock as you're trying to process
 what he told you. Your too-good-to-be-true boyfriend has actually 
killed someone before. You know in your heart, though, that Harlan 
deserves this other chance. He'd made a mistake that had an enormously 
tragic consequence, but you know he'd never do it again. You know he's 
tried to make amends for what he did. You know he is still a good 
boyfriend and a smart kid. ''You hate me, don't you,'' Harlan sighs, 
turning away. ''I knew this would happen, that's why I thought it would 
be best if it just ended before--'' You interrupt him by grabbing his 
shoulders, jerking him back to face you, and kissing him gently. Your 
heart warms as you *finally* get to feel his perfect lips against yours.
 ''Yes, I hate you that much,'' you say as you pull apart. Harlan looks 
like a fish out of water for a few seconds, then says, ''What do you do 
when you like someone?'' ''You may want to back against the wall, then, 
that kind of kiss is pretty extreme,'' you say with a smirk. To your 
delight, Harlan backs against a wall, smiles, and says, ''I'm ready.'' 
You entwine your fingers in his hair and press your lips deeply into 
his. He wraps his arms around your waist and kisses you back, opening 
his mouth slightly. You kiss passionately for 2 minutes (which actually 
feels more like 2 wonderful hours to you) before you finally pull apart.
 ''I still think you're much more than I deserve,'' Harlan says, looking
 into your eyes. ''And I still think you deserve this second chance to 
create a new beginning for yourself,'' you say, ''And hey, if me being 
your girlfriend is involved in this second chance, count me in.'' Harlan
 laughs and blurts out, ''I love you.'' Both of you freeze. Harlan looks
 as if he can't believe he just said it out loud. ''I love you too,'' 
you say back finally. You both pause again, then Harlan says, ''You hate
 me, so you kiss me gently. Then you like me, so you kiss me 
passionately. What happens when you love me?'' This time both of you 
somehow wind up on the floor and the kissing goes on for quite a while 
longer than just 2 minutes.&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
IN THE FUTURE:&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
Harlan is just as smart and responsible as he was before the accident. 
At times you get frustrated with his occasional bouts of low self-worth,
 but after you're done talking (and usually a little more than talking) 
with him, he feels better and he has strength to face the world. You 
both get married after you both graduate college and you have 4 boys.</description>
            <pubDate>Thu, 14 Apr 2011 01:00:46 +0100</pubDate>
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            <title>Antioch-The Deaf 3 last part</title>
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            <description>&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;IN THE FUTURE:&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
''Someday'' comes sooner than you expect when you both marry at age 19. 
With Antioch's caring understanding nature and his tendency to look 
people in the face a lot, he became a great psychologist. You had 1 
little girl and you lived happily together until he died at the age of 
89. Heartbroken, you died a week later. When you saw him in heaven, you 
both were 19 years old again. ''Guess what?'' he says, a gigantic grin 
on his face. ''Last week I heard music for the very first time!''</description>
            <pubDate>Thu, 14 Apr 2011 00:41:00 +0100</pubDate>
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            <title>Antioch- The Deaf 2</title>
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            <description>THE STORY:&amp;nbsp;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
At first, Antioch is more interesting than anything else. He knows sign 
language and teaches some to you. It often amazes you how well he can 
understand what you're saying just by looking at your mouth (to which he
 always responds, ''When you have no other option and a lifetime to do 
it, you learn to read lips pretty well.'') You think it's pretty cool 
how you can go somewhere with a ton of noise, where normally you'd have 
to yell to hear anyone, and you can speak in a whisper and Antioch will 
understand you - however, as you can't read lips, you give him a thumbs 
up if you need him to speak louder. After some time, though, his true 
personality rather than his deafness fascinates you. He always seems 
optimistic about life, taking whatever comes at him and turning it to 
something good. You can always come to him whenever you're feeling 
upset, because somehow, even though he can't hear your words, he can 
feel them, like they go straight through his skin and into his heart. 
After several months with him, you're so in love with him you can barely
 stand it. Whenever you hug, you tell him over his shoulder ''I love 
you,'' knowing full well he can't hear you, but being too afraid to 
really let him know. One day, you and Antioch are sitting on your front 
porch, just enjoying your time together in silence. There is a question 
you've always wanted to ask him, but didn't know if it would be hurtful 
or not. You know how understanding he is, so you decide to ask him 
tonight. ''Hey, Anti--'' you start to say, then realize he's not looking
 at you and you tap him on the shoulder. He looks at your lips. 
''Antioch, I've always wanted to ask you something...it's kind of...I 
don't know...'' you stammer, wondering if you should say it after all. 
''Yes?'' Antioch asks. ''Well...do you ever wish you could...you 
know...do you ever wonder what everything really sounds like?'' you ask.
 ''Do you ever wonder what birds sound like, or what music sounds like, 
or...or what I sound like?'' You know personally that you can't live 
without music - and Antioch has gone his whole life without experiencing
 it. Antioch looks into your eyes, pauses, then sighs, ''I wonder about 
that a lot, actually. A lot of people talk about how life without music 
is life without air, and if that's the case, I haven't even breathed 
yet. People try to describe how different instruments sound to me, but 
it doesn't make sense. They tell me, 'oh, this makes a whining sound' 
but I don't know what whining sounds like. I don't know what anything 
sounds like. I wish I could hear what people really sound like. What you
 really sound like. Actually, most of all, I'd kind of like to know what
 I sound like.'' You feel absolutely terrible and wish so badly that 
somehow, even if just for a moment, you could let him hear what the 
world sounds like. Then he looks at you and smiles. ''But it's not so 
bad,'' he says. ''I can see things, like how beautiful you are.'' You're
 startled, then you giggle. He watches your reaction closely. ''I can 
smell things, like your strawberry hair spray,'' he continues. ''I can 
feel things, like how warm it is when we hug and everything. And I can 
taste things, like--...oh, well, never mind on that one.'' He looks 
away, blushing. Almost laughing, you tap him on the shoulder. He doesn't
 respond. You smirk and tap him harder. He slightly cocks his head in 
your direction. Now you gently grab his jaw and turn his face towards 
you. ''Well, you're already doing without one sense, let's not go 
without another,'' you say. He stares at your lips long after you get 
done talking. Slowly you two lean forward until your lips meet in a 
feathery kiss. When you pull away, Antioch grins. ''You know, just about
 every sense is needed in a kiss except hearing,'' he says. ''Including 
smelling?'' you ask. ''I smell mint on your breath,'' he smiles. You 
lean forward and kiss again, and again, and again. After your short 
passionate session, you look him square in the eyes and tell him, 
''Antioch, I love you.'' ''I love you too,'' he replies, ''And have for a
 while now.'' ''I have too...actually I've been saying I love you over 
your shoulder and behind your back for a while,'' you admit. Antioch 
stares at you, then says, ''That's not very nice. Don't take advantage 
of the deaf guy.'' You laugh and kiss him again, and that's when you 
know that someday - you don't know when, but someday - you will marry 
this young man. &lt;br&gt;</description>
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something about this one draws you in. He seems calm and nonchalant, 
unaffected by the noise and crowds. His long black hair covers most of 
his eyes, but you still see him looking around, as if he's lost 
something. You decide then and there to take a risk and go talk to him. 
So you walk up to him and say, ''Hey, could you tell me where Macy's 
is?'' He completely ignores you and looks away. Immediately you feel 
embarrassed. Then he turns and looks at you, seemingly surprised that 
you're there. ''Um...could you tell me where Macy's is?'' you try again,
 yelling louder above the noise. Already you feel a bit uncomfortable 
that he's staring at your lips while you talk, but then he smiles and 
looks into your eyes. ''It's over that way,'' he says, his voice 
sounding somewhat strange to you. ''I was headed there myself.'' The two
 of you walk over to Macy's and you feel great about yourself - even if 
the guy seems a little weird. You turn to him and tell him your name. He
 doesn't seem to hear you. Then he notices you looking at him and says, 
''Did you say something?'' You tell him your name again. ''Oh, mine's 
Antioch,'' he says. He pauses for a moment, then looks you in the face. 
You don't understand him. He either ignores you, or he won't stop 
looking at you. ''I'm sorry if I make you feel weird or anything,'' he 
says finally, ''I've been completely deaf since birth, so...if you want 
to ask me something and I'm not looking at you, just tap me on the 
shoulder.'' You finally understand why he acts the way he does. You 
start to feel bad for him being deaf, but he looks so cheerful that you 
realize he doesn't care whether he can hear or not. After talking with 
him, you learn that he lives in your town, but you've never seen him at 
school because he's a homeschooler. From that day on, you become best 
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